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 Post subject: Sweetest Day Fic
PostPosted: August 26th, 2007, 3:09 pm 
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Location: Cleveland, Ohio
Zodiac: Pisces
Title: Sweetest Day
Rating: Pg-13
Disclaimer: I don't own the Real Ghostbusters or Elaine Furman. Only Julianna
Raelynn and Carlton James are mine.
Beta: Susie Owens

part 1

Ecto-1 pulled up at Rose's Garden Center, the guys had received a call about
three ghosts destroying flowers and being a menace. There weren't any customers since it was early.

The owner, Ms. Rose came out to the guys scared.

"Hurry! These ghosts are destroying my nursery, messing up my flowers. This is
bad! I'm having a Sweetest Day sale!"

Peter placed his hand on the woman's shoulder, "Don't worry, we'll have the
ghosts out of there in no time."

Then the guys headed inside the store. While inside, the guys searched around
the whole place, while Egon was studying his meter.

"Do you have anything yet?" Winston asked while has his ion gun in place.

Egon shook his head, "Nothing yet."

They kept walking down the area, each one keeping a sharp eye. Then suddenly,
theyheard a loud noise in the next room. The meter started beeing wildly.

Egon placed his meter next to the door, "Gentlemen, these ghosts are in a class
two and they are right in the next room."

"Great, let's go get them! Class twos are real easy. It will be a piece of
cake." Ray cried getting excited.

"Good thing Slimer isn't here. Okay guys, are you ready to kick some ghostly
butt?" Peter asked.

"Ready." The others answered together.

"Then let's do it!" Peter yelled as he kicked in the door.

The guys entered the room where they located the ghosts. They were making a
mess, throwing dirt and pots. One almost hit Peter upside the head.

"Alright guys, it's time tp power up. Let's get these goopers!" Peter as they
all powered their guns and chased the ghosts.

It had taken a ver very long time to catch them because the ghosts had insisted
playing around throwing dirt at the guys, and then throwing garden tools as well.

While Ray was looking for one of the ghosts, suddenly one of the ghosts was
behind him and was about to him him upside the head with a shovel.

Winston yelled, "Ray, look out!"

Ray turned arond and saw was about to happen and cried out, "Oh boy!" as he
managed to dodge out of the way before he got hit. Then he fired his ion gun as the ghost
getting in trapped in the beams. Then Winston opened his trap and the ghost was sucked into it.

After a while, the ghosts were getting tired and Peter came forward with the
trap saying, "Keep them coming!"

As they caught them in the beams, the ghosts snarled and screamed as they were
being sucked in.

Soon it was over. Ms. Rose came forward, "Are those ugly little things gone?"
she asked.

Ray smiled as he held up the trap, "Not to worry ma'am, they are out of your
hair. You don't have to seem then any more."

"How much do I owe you?" she asked.

Ray smiled at her, "It's on the house, ma'am."

"Ray, are you crazy?" Peter asked.

"No Peter, I'm not crazy. This is Sweetest Day, I think we can do one on the house."

Peter nodded his head. Ms. Rose was so grateful, she allowed them to pick out
some flowers for their loved ones.

After the bust was over. The guys headed back to the firehouse and since it was
hoilday. Business was going to be real slow. They decided to take the rest of the day off,
hoping nothing serious would come up.

Ray sat in the back seat of Ecto. He was still excited over the last bust.

"Wasn't that a great bust or what?" he asked as he leaned back of Ecto's seat
with a bunch of flowers in his hands. It was a gift to Elaine for this special day.

"Yeah, I have to agree with that." Winston said as he was driving, "Man, I can't
wait to see the look on Jenny's face when she see how many flowers I got for her."

Jenny was the woman he met when they went skating.

Peter leaned back in the front seat with Winston. "I'm telling you guys, Babs
would love these forget-me-nots. I know, I only met her last week at the bowling alley, but
I don't want her to forget me."

Everyone groaned.

"Peter, that will never happen." Egon replied.

Peter gave him a fake hurt look then said, "Hey big guy, are you going to give
those flowers to Janine? After all, it's sweetest day."

Egon nodded and said, "Of course I am, Peter."

Peter was quiet for a second, then he explained, "I also have flowers for Mrs.
Faversham, because she reminds me of my mother. I decided to cheer her up by bringing her some flowers."

"That's really nice, Peter." Ray smiled, "I'm sure that she would enjoy them very
much."

Then they stopped at Bell's Jewerly Store. Ray went inside and brought Elaine a gold
necklace.

When Ray came out of the jewelry store and got into Ecto, the guys returned to
the firehouse. The rest of the day turned out to be easy and quiet.

Peter was getting bored so he decided to bug Janine. He walked over to her desk.

"Hey Janine? Any calls?"

"No, Dr. Venkman."

Peter sat on her desk and leaned into her face. "Are you sure? I mean all you
been doing all day is filing your nails and snapping your gum."

Janine looked at him, her glasses were slipping down from her nose. "I'm sure."

Janine jumped up; knocking Peter over. "I don't need to give you proof!
Now leave me alone, before I sic Slimer on you!"

Neither one heard Egon coming in, he ignored Peter sitting on the floor and
walked up to Janine holding the flowers. "Uh Janine," he cleared his voice, "These are for you."

Janine looked happy as she accepted them. "These are lovely. Thank you, Egon."
She said as she gave him a kiss on the cheek that made hm blush. "You're welcome,
Janine." he replied.

"Hey, what about me?" said Peter as he was getting up from the floor. Janine
smiled and took a sniff of her flowers. "Get your own, Dr. V."

Ray was driving home, he couldn't wait to give Elaine her gifts or see the look
on her face. He loved to surprise her. Once he got home and parked the car, he ran into the
house. He stopped and stared. The only lights came from lit candles and soft jazz music was playing. He looked around in the dimmed warm room and saw Elaine laying on the
couch dressed only in a silk nightie that took his breath away. She was lying there
eating a bowl of strawberries, dipping them in chocolate. She held up one for Ray.

"Hey big boy, want a bite?"

Ray walked over and took the bite. Then she got another one and they both took a
bit of it and met in the middle for a kiss.

Then Ray remembered his gifts. "I got something for you." he whispered.

"What?" Elaine asked as she slowly kissed his neck.

Ray showed her the flowers and necklace. Elaine took them.

"Oh Ray, thank you! Please put it on me."

Ray smiled and did. She turned around they began kissing again.

When they were done, Elaine looked at her flowers again, "These are really beautiful, Ray.
Thank you and happy sweetest day to you, too." She leaned over and gave Ray a deeper kiss than before that made him blush.

Ray smiled, "You're welcome, sweetie."

Then Elaine whispered romantically, "Since the kids are spending the night with
friends, I thought we can stay at home and watch a romantic movie on the couch. I even fixed us a nice dinner and dessert. Then after the movie, we can take a bath together. I can
wash you in that soft spot you love so much." She smiled and pinched his cheek.

Ray gave her a big grin, "Can't we skip the dinner and movie?"

Elaine laughed, "Happy Sweetest Day, my darling."

"Happy Sweetest Day, Elaine." Ray replied, as he took her hand and lead her into
their bathhouse where they had a sunken tub filled with hot suddy water.

The End


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